Reviews for The Sophomore Season
Ayla chapter 37 . 7/19/2005
Hey, I've been reading your stories for quite some time now, just being the quiet backseat reader and now I feel it is time for me to tell you how I feel about your stories. They are WONDERFUL. They set up and introductions of the characters are simply wonderful. I want to be writer (secretly), but I have yet to come up with the writing as you have. I have ideas, but none I jump the gun on. I don't think I have that skill. The end of 'Sophmore Season' ended kind of abruptly, but if you write a trilogy, I might forgive you :). In all honesty, you have serious potential as an author. You probably have mentioned this and I forgot, but I thought you'd like to know :) I'll let you be now. Keep up the great work with your stories!
BKGal-24 chapter 37 . 7/5/2005
Spiritual advisor, that's a definite lol! But we're kindred spirits, right? I can't wait for the day when you're a famous author! We'll still keep in touch when I move and begin my long journey towards suicide (aka: med school). luv ya right back!
JustLikeMe91 chapter 37 . 7/4/2005
You deserve every compliment you got. THese were wonderful stories and I enjoyed them very much-so I can't wait for the next to come, take your time and be happy with what you write...everyone else will love it! (If they don't like it...then foey for them:))
Madcow13 chapter 37 . 7/4/2005
Well congratulations for finishing this. I guess you are right about the needing to move on. Try and work really hard on Losing Him and perhaps you can make it publishable. I think you deserve to get published even if it isn't with this. I'm not sure why, but I have a feeling Losing Him could be your big break. Okay, I'm rambling. I'm sure whatever you end up doing will be great.
CynicInLove chapter 37 . 7/3/2005
ur right about moving on to a new story, new characters, and new plots,'s..just...SO..HARD. (wa!) i am never forgetting this whole..."saga"...hmm..saga...i never understood that word. ..anyways, i am so glad to hear that u'll be revising bryce. i can't wait to read it again, and probably better than last time because of how much ur writing has improved. as a bonus, we're going to be reading a new story. it's "perfect"

and for old time's sake...

i remember having a i-completely-forgot-the-english-language moment. have u had those? where u forget how to spell the word "you" or "don't" or "have"? and then u don't know what those words mean? and it's all..."foreign" how DID people come up with words like...SPOON...or...CAR? and latin...where did they come up with the prefixes/suffixes? it's like a who-created-the-universe type of question i guess. u can never pinpoint the exact starting of that..something.

where are the time machines when u need them? :D

ps...waiting for the next story..and bryce (drool...goddamn i loved that story..hah...which reminds me...bryce had alcohol problem TRENT cough)

cya later

All The Three Queens chapter 36 . 7/2/2005
Cute! I like it. It was just crazy enough to work.
Madcow13 chapter 36 . 7/2/2005
I'm glad you added the bit about Entranced in: as Ally's books were getting a little neglected in this one. I'm glad Rock was put back in as I've been missing him recently. I liked the smile at the end between Ally and Trent. They met with Ally watching Trent playing baseball and it ended that way... Anyway, I can't wait to hear what you have decided to do next. I'm sure I'll like whatever it is.
Unrecognizable chapter 36 . 7/1/2005
Hee hee, I loved your story. I am sad that it is over but i am glad it ended happily.
BKGal-24 chapter 36 . 7/1/2005
After everything they've been through I'd say a "perfect" ending was in order!

I'm serious about liking this sequel better! Usually they disappoint, but this one didn't at all. I'm mean, who wouldn't love more action between goreous lovers?

I'm looking forward to your next story and remember what I said about when I leave the country? (hint hint) so keep writing.
ice flyer chapter 36 . 6/30/2005
this story and a perfect game are very cute and unique. i love how you incorporated your love of baseball into the story and all. in response to your belief that people tell you it's too slow and then that it's too's just because you spend a LOT of time on how they each other. it's cute but too much i guess is a lil boring. your dramatic parts however are really good! maybe just spice up the "i love you," "no i love you more" scenes or take some of them out because they slow down the plot a bit. other than that, you have two great stories! good job :)
belladonna820 chapter 36 . 6/30/2005
Very sweet...I am definitely sad to see this end. Even if Trent is a Yankee. :P

Oh, and I was worried about birth defects, not alcoholism...believe me, I am all for excessive consumption of alcohol (as I write this, I'm on glass #4 of cabernet. But I'm not pregnant, at least let's all hope not). I just wanted to make sure baby Christina comes out okay.
Emilea chapter 36 . 6/29/2005
AW...that was reli kyoOt. i liked it. it was sweet. so, now what are you going to write? please say you are going to write about Christina, their daughter. I want her to live a beautiful life and please write about her love life. i reli think that wud go well.

BUT, if you dont want to write that its kewl toO...just as long as you write another romance.

babe anjwl.x
Guest chapter 36 . 6/29/2005
Haha, yep, I'm a girl. And thank you for throwing Rock in! That made my day, honestly. *smiles at Rock* Hee.

Anyway, great epilogue! I love the way you pretty much tied things together; having them discuss everything with each other was great. I can't wait for your next story!
CynicInLove chapter 36 . 6/29/2005
the epilogue. finally here. not much to say here because i think i said most of it in the last review..but, once more..congratulations. it was absolutely mind-wrecking, torturous, yet heart-filling all at the same time. so much angst and suspense and mush (haha)..wonderful story. anyways, future ventures? yes? no? possibility? cya later then ~_
ScjT chapter 36 . 6/29/2005
Love it...
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