|Reviews for Pause|
| MySweetestSorrow chapter 1 . 1/25/2005
so sweet! i wish i had a i Memories like this, but dont we all?
| SaveMeToo chapter 1 . 1/5/2005
I'm not sure I get a full understanding of this one, but i like the rythem.
| thatgirl1116 chapter 1 . 1/3/2005
oh! i really like this one. i have a thing for short poems, i think they're great because the author expresses the emotion in as few words possible and the message is generally really clear. this is an excellent example of that.
| simpleplan13 chapter 1 . 11/19/2004
bewautifully written.. lol.. if only my boyfriend and I had this control.. awesome poem