Reviews for Who is to blame?
William Ironclad chapter 1 . 11/22/2004
Aw. Sad. Very nicely done. I like it a lot. Good work.


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Cry Tears of Darkness chapter 1 . 11/20/2004
theres a lot of this in the world, does bite and suck though. nice poem!
myno chapter 1 . 11/19/2004
That... almost got me crying. It's so hard to not feel guilty, because you just feel so dirty, so ashamed, and it seems like some of it must be your fault. Your poem is comforting though, it makes me wonder, are you close someone who has been abused, or have you- because it is full of this fierce protective love for the abused person, somehow. Well, thanks for writing that. It helps.
hiding behind amber eyes chapter 1 . 11/19/2004
i wish all the kids that suffer from abuse could read this. a sweet poem with so much truth. awesome!