Reviews for The Leaves
Kefrith chapter 1 . 7/20/2008
I absolutely love this one! The personification fits perfectly! I really ought to write some nature-themed poems myself!
William Ironclad chapter 1 . 11/22/2004
Wow. I really like this metaphor. I love it. Great!


The Great, the Mighty, the Orc King
Cry Tears of Darkness chapter 1 . 11/20/2004
i like this. nice metaphor used
myno chapter 1 . 11/19/2004
Oh I love the last stanza, especially the last 3 lines.
for deletion chapter 1 . 11/19/2004
Beautiful. That's how I feel at times, too, but we must always try harder to rise up and float in the wind once more.
hiding behind amber eyes chapter 1 . 11/19/2004
o! LOVE the metaphor!
Raya Dronaile chapter 1 . 11/19/2004
well done and put into words. great job on this piece it was very moving.
poetic abortion chapter 1 . 11/19/2004
Awesome reviews ! Love thhe poem ! _ Please don't say such nice things ! Your making me blush ! ::blushes::

Great job ! I love the way you write with such emotion and yet have some detail ! o Makes me soo jealous ! Great job yet again on the poem ! ::Blushes::

~ Noelle ~
catseyeview chapter 1 . 11/19/2004
Absolutely love your last know and set yourself apart from the leaf, that light of understanding you do have choice. Profound!