|Reviews for The Night|
| Siren-esque chapter 1 . 7/2/2008
Wonderful. Straight to the point. If it was me, I would add some punctuation to further enhance the poem, but it depends on your preference.
| me10 chapter 1 . 2/15/2005
:) sweet, it made me smile :) great use of words and size of lines. and yes. PLEASE tell me how to make stanzas!
| Manuel Fajar chapter 1 . 1/22/2005
Now but residue,
Misty memory,—sweet dew,
Endures deep in you.
| twilightwriter07 chapter 1 . 11/26/2004
Nice work you have here...so full of emotion. Well done.
| Cry Tears of Darkness chapter 1 . 11/20/2004
thats nice and dreamy!
| JDWrites chapter 1 . 11/20/2004
Well, it's getting you more reviewers I guess, but you could just write a story rather than a bunch of poems...it would get you there faster. Oops! I'm being dumb now aren't I? Well...it's just my solution, I love stories...that's why I have only a few but I devote my life to them! It's gets a whole lot of words and it creates a meaning for why I exist! lol, j/k...I think...
| dusk orchid chapter 1 . 11/19/2004
Oh, nice feel of emotion here! XD
| hiding behind amber eyes chapter 1 . 11/19/2004
hi again! how close r u to your goal? lol short and sweet. keep up the hard work!
| poetic abortion chapter 1 . 11/19/2004
Thats sweet. Really it is. Your a very very very talented poet when it comes to showing emotions.
~ Noelle ~