Reviews for Bitten by the World
mAxTeR chapter 1 . 11/22/2004
this is good.. great job.. i cant say more.. just keep on writing..
Mynix chapter 1 . 11/20/2004
I love the metaphoric nature of this piece..
Cry Tears of Darkness chapter 1 . 11/20/2004
wow. that was AWESOME AND GREAT! amazing job and wow. :)
catseyeview chapter 1 . 11/20/2004
What a unique and smart line, "It has ganged up around my window." amazing line...keep writing like this and people will know your work.
Ashes of a Willow chapter 1 . 11/20/2004
beautiful! I loved the imagery! Keep up the awesome work!
Aarrian chapter 1 . 11/20/2004
Another great poem. I find the meaning quite ambiguous. You could be talking about the weather or life in general. A real window or a metaphorical window. I like this. Keep writing!