Reviews for Rain Drop
Sacred-Phoenix-Nephthys chapter 1 . 10/26/2005
Really good and nice imagery, i like it...i like all ur stuff, it is hard to find the best of it tho...um, would u be able to look at mi poem, Serene Healed Light...i think it is one of mi best, thanks_
Manuel Fajar chapter 1 . 3/28/2005
Full exposed all of life's intentions,

We view a sequence of photographs,

Leading inevitably somewhere,

Yet pause and gasp at abrupt ending,

As if the reel could roll-on-and-on,

As if our hearts didn't really know it,

That "it" of our finitude and end,—

Or conclusion of suspicions held,

Knowing full well our intuition,

Is but prediction that we would hide,

¿But isn't that what we daily need,

Some smooth illusion that covers truth?
Mrs. Reamer87 chapter 1 . 12/25/2004
it could use something i dont kno what but i needs like this touch of... well i think of something but overall pretty good.
William Ironclad chapter 1 . 11/22/2004
Yes! I love it! Very simple, yes, but it doesn't need to be any longer. Awesome!

W,

The Great, the Mighty, the Orc King
Cry Tears of Darkness chapter 1 . 11/20/2004
its good!
frozen tiger tears chapter 1 . 11/20/2004
its so short and simple, but the meaning is powerful. I really like it alot. keep up the good work.
poetic abortion chapter 1 . 11/20/2004
Really good. utterly poetic !

~ Noelle ~
hiding behind amber eyes chapter 1 . 11/20/2004
i like it! :) i think it's interesting. it would be awesome if you'd put up a second chapter about when the 'bigger things to come' are over. good job
Raya Dronaile chapter 1 . 11/20/2004
very pretty piece here, good simili as well, great job!