Reviews for Unheard Cries
SaveMeToo chapter 1 . 12/17/2004
I really like that part "her cries go unheard, they fall into the silence like the first...", but then again i job, better most i've read on this site, not that i've read any bad ones yet...Check out my stuff sometime, if you like depressing stuff mingled with a little horror, and for the time i had a boyfriend some really cute love ones.

Thank dancinggal..89 for introducing you to me and to this awesome site!
Cry Tears of Darkness chapter 1 . 11/20/2004
ahh oh oh wow.
GothicSpook chapter 1 . 11/20/2004
I like it! Full of emotion and so sad!

Me and my friend created a site (Full of poetry people) with LOADS of stuff! You should chekc it out!

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tastes like love chapter 1 . 11/20/2004
cool poem...and it is just "Labryinth" not "The Labyrinth," :) it is my favorite movie!
Tiantian Wang chapter 1 . 11/20/2004
This poem like your other poems is full of emotion...keep up the great work...
poetic abortion chapter 1 . 11/20/2004
I like I like. You are really a gret author ! ::squeels.:: n.n

~ Noelle ~
zamthezombieman chapter 1 . 11/20/2004
Whoa, excellent wording. I wouldn't add or subrtact anything it's brilliant, no one notices the FIRST drop of rain, not unless you were paying attention...awesome work
hiding behind amber eyes chapter 1 . 11/20/2004
hum...i'm not sure about the line. it makes it seem like teh poems choppy. good poem tho. i like it.