Reviews for Foolish Decision
Chasing Skylines chapter 1 . 4/26/2009
[as left me with a hole in my heart]

Shouldn't that be "has" and not "as?"

[and be each other’s first and only loves.]

Shouldn't "loves" be love? Though I might be confusing something in this case.

I think you showed the emotion of the narrator well, and the last line is sad.

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Manuel Fajar chapter 1 . 4/3/2005
OK—set the mood—Rachmaninoff,—

Piano concerto Opus 30,—

¿Can it soothe a bit that hole was left?

¿Where is sound remedy for hearts broke?

¿But, maybe jazz, some Coltrane perhaps?

He had so many gentle songs of love,

¿But, then you might prefer something newer?

¿Have you ever heard Luis Miguel singing?


¿Broadway—Cole Porter?—so many great songs.

While I ponder,—piano's crescendo builds,

Arpeggios go up and down with strings,

Soothing ruffled life into turquoise dreams,

Into pianissimo enticing heart,

But then,—I've never seen Thy eyes my dear.

p.s. ¿Am I running out of review space? [ *LoL* ;-) ]
The Imposer chapter 1 . 1/2/2005
Fucking hell, I honestly felt like I was being taken back in time to when I split up with my own first love, very eeri in that respect, brilliant though.

what do you think of my (The Desolation Of Love)
poetic abortion chapter 1 . 12/25/2004
Oh my god. How do you come up with these gorgouse heart felt poems ?

~ Noelle ~
hiding behind amber eyes chapter 1 . 11/20/2004
this is cool. i like it! keep up the awesome work
Cry Tears of Darkness chapter 1 . 11/20/2004
ah oh wow. sad.
GothicSpook chapter 1 . 11/20/2004
Now that spoke STRAIGHT to me! It was like you were me! *wipes tears away* I just lost my first boyfriend :(Anyway, BRILLIANT poem! It's just wonderful!You're definatly going on my fav authors list! You're fantastic and I have a lot of poems to read from you!

Ps: Thankies for the kind reviews! *huggles*