|Reviews for Painting Her Nails|
| Manuel Fajar chapter 2 . 4/1/2005
In evanescent acts disclosed lies life,
¿Is covering up nature but man's lies,
Told woman to man enticing slyly,
Or enhancement of a hidden beauty?
So many miniscule motions perfect,
Tapestries of needlework silk precise,
Symmetries measured micrometer light,
To make fond a lover's giddy red heart,
Though she questions,—she knows deep intentions,
Primeval, older than conventions new,
Back to Eve's primeval pink apple blush.
| Liviania chapter 2 . 1/2/2005
It's scary how very real this poem is. You've just captured the personality perfectly, universally.
PS Who can resist Cary Grant?
PPS That makes sense to me.
| betta chapter 1 . 12/18/2004
I lpve all 4 of your poems and stories and i can't believe you wrote that many, WOW! How old are you ? you can IM me my screen name is Trescon.
| myno chapter 2 . 11/22/2004
Very nice, I'm even more fond of this poem after reading the two points of view. Very well written, great ending.
| hiding behind amber eyes chapter 2 . 11/21/2004
hum...this is interesting. i hope you don't feel this way, tho i no that's how it seems. i'm at the point were i dont care what ppl think anymore. great poem, love the different POV's
| hiding behind amber eyes chapter 1 . 11/20/2004
awesome. new perspective on todays teens. lol i'm sorry but i can't stand girls who don't know anything but makeup and stuff like that. can you? i love this poem!
| Cry Tears of Darkness chapter 1 . 11/20/2004
that was awesome!
| myno chapter 1 . 11/20/2004
well done, I really like this one.