Reviews for Painting Her Nails
Manuel Fajar chapter 2 . 4/1/2005
In evanescent acts disclosed lies life,

¿Is covering up nature but man's lies,

Told woman to man enticing slyly,

Or enhancement of a hidden beauty?

So many miniscule motions perfect,

Tapestries of needlework silk precise,

Symmetries measured micrometer light,

To make fond a lover's giddy red heart,

Though she questions,—she knows deep intentions,

Primeval, older than conventions new,

Back to Eve's primeval pink apple blush.
Liviania chapter 2 . 1/2/2005
It's scary how very real this poem is. You've just captured the personality perfectly, universally.

Livi

PS Who can resist Cary Grant?

PPS That makes sense to me.
betta chapter 1 . 12/18/2004
I lpve all 4 of your poems and stories and i can't believe you wrote that many, WOW! How old are you ? you can IM me my screen name is Trescon.
myno chapter 2 . 11/22/2004
Very nice, I'm even more fond of this poem after reading the two points of view. Very well written, great ending.
hiding behind amber eyes chapter 2 . 11/21/2004
hum...this is interesting. i hope you don't feel this way, tho i no that's how it seems. i'm at the point were i dont care what ppl think anymore. great poem, love the different POV's
hiding behind amber eyes chapter 1 . 11/20/2004
awesome. new perspective on todays teens. lol i'm sorry but i can't stand girls who don't know anything but makeup and stuff like that. can you? i love this poem!
Cry Tears of Darkness chapter 1 . 11/20/2004
that was awesome!
myno chapter 1 . 11/20/2004
well done, I really like this one.