|Reviews for Your Pawn|
| May Elizabeth chapter 1 . 10/5/2008
Things also change. I remember when I was like this. A fresh-faced 15 year old. I lost mine at 16. To me sex is an individual choice. I regretted my choice, but I know a lot of people who don't. Do what you think is best for you. Still a pretty good poem, something I used to strive for. Peace.
| nuclear red chapter 1 . 1/30/2005
It's good to be strong enough to say 'no' when you feel like you're not ready or willing to jump into something like that. Life is too short to end up dwelling on regrets, so it's best to avoid regretables all together. I like the way you expressed this - very nice. Keep up the good work! Always be yourself! -Nuclear Red
| Manuel Fajar chapter 1 . 1/9/2005
He sounds like a bum,
But you caught his idle hum,—
You're no toy to strum. —m—
Subtle cheek on cheek,
Effulgent chest on chest warm,—
A prelude, perhaps . . .
But not a 3-letter word,
Not by the longest of shots.
| hiding behind amber eyes chapter 1 . 11/20/2004
o i like this one. you can just feel the anger. lol um...i think i like the title Your Pawn better, it's more uniqe
| poetic abortion chapter 1 . 11/20/2004
It's ok with me. That would be cool. _
Your poem was awesome ! Just Oh-My-Fucking-Gay-God beautiful ! Never stop writing ! o
| Cry Tears of Darkness chapter 1 . 11/20/2004
i prefer your pawn to a game. nice poem! now that i have reviewed them all, off to do some other authors then im doing more hmwk! oh joy *rolls eyes*