Reviews for Of the Places Lost |
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![]() ![]() ![]() I really like your story Temmon. Sorry that I don't comment on every chapter but I tend just ... not to do that. But I read them. :3 Are you going to update? |
![]() ![]() ![]() Nice. Chapters seem a little short though. |
![]() ![]() I mean...this is the first time I've ever reviewed you! Ever, I swear!Jeez. You do get on , crap. This is worthless. Post the rest of your chapters now. |
![]() ![]() ![]() may i suggest adding more background info on the characters in future chapters like; apperance or what the relationship of josh and chris (like some brothers and sisters fight alot and some are best friend) but i'm very intrested in your story. keep writn' |
![]() ![]() ![]() WOO! YOU GOT AN ACCOUNT! Good for you! :D I love this story by the way. |