Reviews for Don't Give Up
Steve chapter 1 . 11/21/2004
well u know what...im not gonna give up on ya! so there...and as someone once told me...what doesnt kill ya makes ya stronger
JohnnyGodfather chapter 1 . 11/21/2004
Nice rant. It's not a poem, not at all. If it were, it would be fairly crappy blank verse. Prose is a better form for this, and I think you know that. As for you and your bf: sex heals all wounds. LOL. Just joking. But seriously, try the sex.
hiding behind amber eyes chapter 1 . 11/21/2004
this is a good rant, put into poem form. lol i like it, it shows how you really feel. your poems r awesome! i hope things work out! (you could show this to him...)
Rebecca Kelsey chapter 1 . 11/21/2004
this is great. keep writing.