|Reviews for Time|
| Eirien chapter 1 . 11/22/2004
Unique. The short lines and word choice make this easy to read and the rhymes and rhythm give it a musicality, yet there is deep philosophical though in it. The end is surprising, a thing I really like in a pem, and it turns the contemplative tone of the rest into a negative outcry at the end, an anguished exclamation that gives a good climax to the poem.