Reviews for Who Says I Don't Have A Life?
Herminia chapter 1 . 2/5/2006
Wow. The dialogue is very believable and so are the descriptions. Good job!
voice.writer chapter 1 . 1/28/2006
me likey! me likey molto molto!

wow yay for gibberish

who is this about, by the way? i think i have a vague sense, but i'm not sure...
Noctua chapter 1 . 3/15/2005
He doesn't run track!Don't tell me, when he got animated, he developed that really funny faux english accent that he just seems to do unintentionally?Good job!Its him all right!
Theanyx chapter 1 . 12/10/2004
Awesome short story! I luv the "showing, not telling," and it sends a good message we all need to think about sometimes. Just one request: please, PLEASE change TJ's name!
A.J. Paterson chapter 1 . 11/23/2004
Aw that's cute. Strange though, people tell me I have no life when I'm actually doing what I love - which is writing for and fictionpress lol
SilverGryphin chapter 1 . 11/22/2004
someday you will have to tell me who this is about. TJ's name is not TJ, "Rachel". But good job.
Radyn chapter 1 . 11/21/2004
Yeah. Overachievers suck.