Reviews for Glitter |
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![]() ![]() LOVE! i get how this feels! ugh just so freakin confusing but so clear at the same time! |
![]() ![]() No, my name is not Björn, just to your facts. Loved it, as it explain my confused feelings towards both genders, twah... Erh, good work, I suppose? Little Björn and Big Björn (Bear.. rawr) Ergo, you don't even need to know what I am babbling about... Shait? |
![]() ![]() ![]() Yes! The imagery is as perfect as the poem! I giggled at both the title and the last line. *high five* |
![]() ![]() ![]() Myself, and most of my friends, are bisexual. Women are beautiful, men are gorgeous, I don't see why everyone isn't bisexual, LOL. This was funny and sexy, very well written, Great job. |
![]() ![]() ![]() That was marvelous! Simply excrutiatingly pleasing. Not many can get bisexuality down right, but when they do it's beautiful. Yeah, guys in lipgloss... M... You're a great writer, I can tell just from reading this. And you understand lots of things... Great job with this. -Robin |
![]() ![]() ![]() Wow! This is an AMAZING poem. It rhymes so naturally, and it flows really well. It's very unique in its style; I've never read a poem that reads the way this does. Also, I'm starting a GSBA in my school, and I read in a review that you're the president of yours, and since I've never been involved in one before, I was hoping you'd e-mail me with some ideas and discussion topics for meetings, or just basically what you do. Thanks so much. You really have an interesting talent. Your other works are very different from anyone else's. No other poems reads the same way. Excellent. |
![]() ![]() ![]() nice! i'm bi, but i'm a girl, but it doesn't really matter, we both like boys and girls. lol. i really liked it, adding to favs, awesomeness!~*~confwuzzled~*~ |
![]() ![]() I'm not bisexual, so i wouldn't really know what its like. But it must be the best of both worlds. I know i'd get a hell of a lot more dates if i was bi, guys tell me how sexy i am a lot. Since i dont really believe in gender as anything more than an artificial construct, i dont know why i'm straight. I guess its because its not just erotically appealing to me to have sex with someone who has a male body. Its like...i wouldn't ever be interested in a "rape fantasy scenerio" that a lot of couples find erotic. Not that i'm judgemental, i just dont think its hot myself so i dont want to. Thats how i feel about guys: I dont believe that they are fundamentally different from girls, but its not not my thing erotically. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Sorry but I'm a nitpicker and you said lips twice in the same line... might I suggest saying "With glossed up lips that shine like dew"? Other than that one line which seemed off the poem flowed very well and made an interesting point… it escapes me now as to what the point was but I saw the point and loved the poem. |