|Reviews for Toota Dil, Broken Heart|
| Selphie T. Kinneas chapter 1 . 12/9/2004
This is great.
That u for the review, it was very encouring. Im an american born paki, so majority of ur poem i understood... though the english writing make it kinda difficult to understand.
Im very impressed by how many languauges u posted. Keep up the great work.
| smile persephone chapter 1 . 11/27/2004
Interesting poem and style. Very nice.
| Torden engel chapter 1 . 11/25/2004
Very unique but I enjoyed reading it. Keep up the great job!
| Amethyst Eyed Cynical One chapter 1 . 11/23/2004
well so cool that ur translating urdu are so wicked themselves,its cool that others can read em too now.