Nice chapter! I hope Mikona can get out of this situation and that Jeffery comes out of this alive! This is really getting intense. Take care & keep up thegood work.

review in progress. alsfjdl;afjd.

The fight scene was pretty good, despite being rather short. Cheap way ro win, but, as they say, all's fair in war. Keep up the good work & take care.

Hey! Still writing I see! That's awesome! Wish I was still at it. Those were fun times huh! lol

Hi there!

Meh, sorry for not giving you a signed review, I'm lazy tonight and can't be bothered to sign in. Anyway, a good chapter. It's interesting to see all the characters slowly come back together again (though I really need to re-read Mikona 'cause I've forgotten almost everything -_-) which is why as a bit of constructive criticism I think you should take a little bit more time to reintroduce the characters. Just maybe the odd paragraph or two to remind readers what happened before hand , who's who etc. If you ever get this published it would likely help too since the books would be published with at least a year in between. The plot is thickening though, and I can't wait to get to the wedding scene. Go and save Mikona guys! Yay! Update soon and thanks for the reviews of my story. Okay, see ya later.

Shiko87

with your long absence, i'm still trying to remember the . but anyway, i enjoyed the update. i like lisa's spunk. are you going to show more about her and her 'relationship' with gregory?

Wow, you finally updated! I had to go back and scan the last few chapters to try and remember who everyone was. I'm still a little confused about the characters, but I'm sure I'll catch on after a few more updates. This chapter was written very well, and I'm interested in this new, softer side of Lisa. Keep writing, don't give up, and update soon! (I hate suspense haha.)

-jelie36-

PS: Thanks so much for including me in your A/N. _

I'm so mad that's its taken me this time to get and read your story. It's amazing, as usual. I didn't expect any less than what I got. Update! And the fight scene was very well written.

Well, there's nothing left to read, so you had better just update soon. _ I really like where this is going and frankly, I'm going to be in complete suspense until you post your next chapter. Have pity on me? :(

-jelie36-

*Claps* You've already gotten better with your writing! I think I'll like the sequel even more than the first book, although honestly you could almost combine them into one. Either way, keep this up! _

-jelie36-

You switched back and forth between tenses in this chapter, and wasn't Mikona's hair golden? o_O Other than that, great start to what I know will be a great story. _

-jelie36-

I wonder what'll happen to Mikona. I really like this story so update soon, k?

I like Lisa's character.. ;) spunky!

ps. sorry for the late review..

I like it so far. I'm curious how things will work out for Mikona. Update soon! Chapter 3 is up for Perfectly Imperfect. Thanks!

Woo hoo, go Lisa! Punch him in the face! Bwa ha ha ha ha... okay that's enough. Now Lisa I remember quite vividly. Ooh, and now she's got a love interest. Wonder which friend she's planning to look for... FIND HARRY!

Yep, I thought the fight scene was done quite well actually. It wasn't overdramatized and made into a basic schoolyard scuffle, but still showed Lisa's toughness. My only suggestion would be to give a better description of Gregory and exactly how she knows him. I'm guessing a boyfriend? Anyways, great chapter and I shall wait eagerly for the next one!

And, I should mention, thank you for the nice reviews I'm glad you enjoy my story. *sniff* so grateful... it was my first girl on girl catfight mwa ha ha! Great job and update soon!

Woo Hoo an update! I love how you showed a more cheerful side to Mikona in this chapter and the description was really well done! Argh, I need to re-read Mikona I, me thinks. I can't remember the names of the different people. Lily is Harry's wife, right? But she works at the palace... Ugh, I'll have to do some serious re-reading when I find the time. I'm so pitiful. Anywhoo's that's my problem and has nothing to do with your writing, so great job on this chapter and I'm off to read the next one!

P.S. Woo hoo, thanks for the compliments! And I love reading your story! For some reason I always remember hair colour... probably because that's how I picture people. When writers don't give me a hair colour I'm lost. Sad, huh? -