|Reviews for Utopia|
| silvermoonsparkling chapter 1 . 5/15/2005
GOD this is scary. Sorry. I reviewed one of your other poems saying you got me... well it's almost as if you ARE me. It's scary.
| Meems chapter 1 . 5/3/2005
Oh wow! Definitely going under my favorite stories list! The last stanza made me shiver. Two thumbs up!
| Aimers chapter 1 . 12/5/2004
wow! that was really good!
| Passage chapter 1 . 12/1/2004
Good point, I'm single so I don't have that problem though :-)
| DukDog27 chapter 1 . 11/25/2004
I really like the imagery here. "All metal and eyeliner," is a great line. The third stanza makes me all teary-eyed. Well done.
| Anais chapter 1 . 11/23/2004
That's a really nice poem. You're a very talented writer.
| Faithless Juliet chapter 1 . 11/23/2004
Heartfelt and honest, you have a true gift with detail and up the good work.