Reviews for The Only
r0x0r j00 b0x0r5 chapter 1 . 11/24/2004
short...but still awesome i really liked itkeep writing :)

review some of mine again?
jennnayyy chapter 1 . 11/24/2004
Wow- i love it!

the only little girl..

chiling. spooky. i love it!
forbidden passion chapter 1 . 11/24/2004
i like this, i can relate! i am gonna go on reading all your other poems! thanx for the reviews!
deathfairy20 chapter 1 . 11/24/2004
amazing good bravo bravo

sayanara
Confuzion in a Nutshell chapter 1 . 11/24/2004
i love it. it has a feeling of lonliness but then again a hint of independence.
mountain laurel chapter 1 . 11/23/2004
This poem is really well written, I'm not exactly sure that I like it, but the emotions that it triggers are amazing in such a short poem. Keep up the good work and thank you for the review!Laurel
Boothestar chapter 1 . 11/23/2004
This is a masterpiece. While reading it (which I did 10 times in a row .. it was that good), I could actually picture a little girl saying these very words, and it filled me with sorrow. This was so emotional, and vivid. I just adore this kind of writing. Keep up the magnificant work.
Tiantian Wang chapter 1 . 11/23/2004
The emotions that spill out of this poem are very sincerely and moving… you use each word to it’s fullest potential… this poem is just wonderful, simply a great poem…
I-Am-Me-Only-Me chapter 1 . 11/23/2004
Aly: cool... it's interasting!micheal: yep awsome..
lipstick stain chapter 1 . 11/23/2004
i adore it. really. i love your style of writing. keep it up :)thanks for the reviews-Lipstick Stain
Poetrybay chapter 1 . 11/23/2004
i like the poem and the way you used your verses where great. hey need advice and helped on some storis am writing on fictionpress. can you please read them and tell me what you think and if you have some friends on fictionpress asked them to because am thinking about getting them publish and am also checking out the rest of your stories on fictionpress
Saeger chapter 1 . 11/23/2004
Feeling lonely, were we? Well written, getting across the feeling, and stating bluntly what you meant. I like your work, it's really good.
simpleplan13 chapter 1 . 11/23/2004
I know that feeling of lonliness... nicely done
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