Reviews for Move On
Manuel Fajar chapter 1 . 2/9/2005
Schuman—piano plays,

I imagine your twirling,—

Life's ballerina.

With a kiss you left,

What gentility that was,—

Then, not now, someday.

¿Would you twirl me too?

¿Spin my soul—wild abandon?

¡Pull hard on heart's strings!

Would that it were so,

That love moved rapidity,

When it dagger sunk.

Color red you spun,

As we circled round & round,

¿Who will leave who first?

¿Was that you who cried?

I thought rain and sun were mixed,

Yellow into gray.

Pouring all your tears,

Dewdrops falling cherry pink,

Spring without bright sun.
poetic abortion chapter 1 . 12/21/2004
Everyone could relate to this. - I've felt this way so much in my life. -_- -

~ Noelle~
hiding behind amber eyes chapter 1 . 11/23/2004
so sad. i no my friend felt this way after her break up. good job
Cry Tears of Darkness chapter 1 . 11/23/2004
oh thats daring! COOL!
Emi Amara chapter 1 . 11/23/2004
Hiya! This feeling's so familiar to me, but the poem's unigue ) Well done