Reviews for Untitled 11 23 04
poetic abortion chapter 1 . 12/21/2004

~ Noelle ~
Steve chapter 1 . 11/23/2004
well...i dont wanna do stuff like did remind me of Grendal though...a parody by John was based from Beowulf...u can see someone (or something) coming in a ripping someone apart piece by was interesting...makes you think
Cry Tears of Darkness chapter 1 . 11/23/2004
i like i like. im sorry reviews are a bore. cant find a new way to say youre great
elvenstorm chapter 1 . 11/23/2004
Wow powerful images! Very strong and angsty. Liking it especically the chocolate line. That kind of seperates it from all the other love angst poems, makes it stand out :) Maybe slight overuse of word blood but spose that cant be helped really. Really nice poem! Love its viciousness well done!