|Reviews for Love Song|
| Manuel Fajar chapter 1 . 1/22/2005
Perfection's heart's love,
Soul's dwelling, moist kisses fond,
Leaving imprints soft.
Like autumn leaves on brown earth,
Like winter snow on clear lakes. -m-
| poetic abortion chapter 1 . 12/21/2004
~ Noelle ~
| graffiti-skies chapter 1 . 11/30/2004
wow the ending...
"but mere words cannot compare to the love I have for you."
if u try hard enough...maybe someday you will write the most perfect love song...hehe
| hiding behind amber eyes chapter 1 . 11/23/2004
aww. that would be perfect to him, i'm sure. that's so sweet!
| Steve chapter 1 . 11/23/2004
i would write u a song too...but it would involve accordians and a whole lot of funny sounds...hajde kolo!
| Cry Tears of Darkness chapter 1 . 11/23/2004
this is nice. dont worry bout it. you write beautiful stuff.
| elvenstorm chapter 1 . 11/23/2004
know the feeling! It's so frustrating! Lovely poem though, nicely summed up. Keep writing :)