Reviews for Love Song
Manuel Fajar chapter 1 . 1/22/2005
Perfection's heart's love,

Soul's dwelling, moist kisses fond,

Leaving imprints soft.

Like autumn leaves on brown earth,

Like winter snow on clear lakes. -m-
poetic abortion chapter 1 . 12/21/2004
Sweet

~ Noelle ~
graffiti-skies chapter 1 . 11/30/2004
wow the ending...

"but mere words cannot compare to the love I have for you."

loved it!

if u try hard enough...maybe someday you will write the most perfect love song...hehe
hiding behind amber eyes chapter 1 . 11/23/2004
aww. that would be perfect to him, i'm sure. that's so sweet!
Steve chapter 1 . 11/23/2004
i would write u a song too...but it would involve accordians and a whole lot of funny sounds...hajde kolo!
Cry Tears of Darkness chapter 1 . 11/23/2004
this is nice. dont worry bout it. you write beautiful stuff.
elvenstorm chapter 1 . 11/23/2004
know the feeling! It's so frustrating! Lovely poem though, nicely summed up. Keep writing :)