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Reviews for
self induced pain
avani.awakening
chapter 1 .
11/24/2004
Too depressing and blunt to appreciate. It sounds better when you make metaphors and work around the meanings of words. You're quite capable, you've done it before.
Sorry if I'm being harsh- ;)