Reviews for Promise
poetic abortion chapter 1 . 12/21/2004
HA ! Reminds me of MY doctor. (He told me I needed a PAINLESS surgery. No strings attached. But if he calls a month of crying PAINLESS there must be something wrong with him.-_-) I like this. It actually made me laugh.

~ Noelle ~
graffiti-skies chapter 1 . 11/30/2004
lol...foot doc huh? ama...tho it sounds more like a friend breaking a promise...at least thts how i looked at it when i read it. i can relate to this too...well written...the last stanza is awesome!
myno chapter 1 . 11/26/2004
Hm, the last line is a little awkward. Is the 'and more' really necessary? Also, in the 3rd stanza, it should be hollow rather than hallow. Overall a good poem though, i enjoyed reading it.
hiding behind amber eyes chapter 1 . 11/23/2004
lol i can see the sarcasim. i like it, ive been promised many times, just to find lies
Cry Tears of Darkness chapter 1 . 11/23/2004
u spelled promises wrong in the title... i like the poem.