Reviews for Kitchen Dance
the tiger lily chapter 1 . 10/19/2005
I enjoyed reading the story very much. It is quite descriptive and detailed. I especially enjoyed the part where the plants were thinking and such.
On Mercury chapter 1 . 11/25/2004
That was so beautiful.

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The Gentle Troubadour chapter 1 . 11/24/2004
I'm extremely impressed with this piece! You're one of the best authors on the site.I love the way you wove this tale, and especially the part about the Old Spice cologne. It choked me up. :)
Zen Phoenix chapter 1 . 11/24/2004
You have inspired a rare occurrence in my day. I usually make it a point not to review, as I am a right mean bastard but hate to hurt the feelings of others...That being said I found your use of the language and your imagery mesmerizing, your ability to snatch my usually absent attention when writing about a mundane subject matter is impressive. Keep writing you are very talented.
leen02x chapter 1 . 11/23/2004
wow, that was so good. i loved the detail! i could practically see everything in my head. i really like the way that this is written, it's really deep and i felt like i was actually inside Karen's head. GREAT job!