|Reviews for Creeped Out|
| What.Tha.What chapter 11 . 9/18/2011
| What.Tha.What chapter 7 . 9/16/2011
Oh Oh Ehm Gee-iSh momeNT...
| Estelin chapter 11 . 7/12/2008
this was excellent. keep up the good work and writing. maybe you could check out my story
philosopher acres farm.
| Strangely Natural chapter 11 . 9/19/2007
It was cute and sad, it ended too quickly for me, oh well.
| gummybearmurder chapter 3 . 5/7/2007
Kay, so I've already ready the entire story, but I just picked a chapter to review.. But anyways, I LOVED it. It was adorable in an odd kind of way. :)
| Keir16 chapter 11 . 7/12/2005
OMG! you ended this really soon, but it was really good, i liked it a lot
| stuart347 chapter 1 . 7/12/2005
averige first chapter, no direction or real indacation of things to come. Souless.
| Seraindipity chapter 11 . 6/8/2005
What a delightfully pointless, underdeveloped, but wonderfully amusing and fun to read story with fun characters! I liked, it, surprisingly, and I'd give you advice but I already know you've improved, so yeah.
| iubar chapter 7 . 5/21/2005
It is so easy to tell that you are 13. If you want a story with more veracity, try making the events plausible and spaced out, thus adding a realism that you are seem to have a sense of humor, though, which saves this story from utter destruction.
| GothicBallerina chapter 11 . 5/15/2005
i really liked it but i wish you didn't end it.
| gonnabefamous chapter 11 . 5/14/2005
Oh gosh I am so sorry if i did it I really didn't mean Bitch as an insult I was just playing. I am REALLY sorry if it was me. Sorry again if it was me but I like your story and wish you'ld keep writing. Oh and could you well not say my name over the net it kind of freaks me out you know.
| ChocolateSugar chapter 1 . 5/12/2005
your story from the first chapter seemed pretty good, but it was really short. just try to make the next chapters longer. though you've already completed this so, i'm not sure why im telling yout this. you asked for reviews though so i did review
| Li'l Jazz Babe chapter 11 . 5/12/2005
U rock! I am 13 too, and I love porn! Do you know any good websites on the internet with bondage literature or on fictionpress?
| anon chapter 9 . 4/21/2005
that 'N’lee' name is dumb as shit
| doragon41 chapter 10 . 4/17/2005
you atleast have to do an umm ending chapter thiny...*cough* yes because you cant just leave us hanging. please...i just want a "and everyone lived happily ever after" chapter...please?