Reviews for Overlooked Majesty
Arafax chapter 1 . 11/25/2006
"The beauty of simplicity."

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That line is so true. I often find myself making things much more complicated than they should. Nice work...I have a feeling that I will enjoy all your pieces. I hope I don't start to repeat myself in my reviews. I often don't know what to say and since I have not been writing very long...believe myself to not be qualified to give reviews.
Femme de Dieu chapter 1 . 7/11/2006
The theme of this is beautiful, and yes, so often overlooked...

Technical: Rhyme sheme and cadence slightly off...but it didn't detract from the message.

"His invisible qualities are seen from the world's creation onward, his power and godship, so that they (who refuse to see it) are inexcusable."

Awesome, in the truest sense of the word!
The Restock Bandits chapter 1 . 11/28/2004
Loved it again. Are you sure I can't turn pirate and simply steal all of your verses and songs?