|Reviews for Dancing On Parallels|
| Amalia Jagd chapter 1 . 6/23/2006
it doesnt make a whole lot of sense. but it flowed very nicely and good rhymes.
| Storyspinner1600 chapter 1 . 1/14/2006
I remember this poem! wasn't in the 8th grade lit mag? i like it, though the end isn't the smoothest it could be. I understand what the last line is saying, but when it ends without the rhymn its rather aburpt, though I suppose that could be on purpose.