Reviews for Five Years After
Helix chapter 1 . 1/13/2005
I'm not ging to pick on grammar extensively. There were mistakes, but his is a poem, so I'm going to let it slide.

The rhythm is a little awkward, if that is an important component, but aside, it is an above average poem. I give it a 3 of 5.
Myriah chapter 1 . 12/2/2004
Cute? What? Not at all. It was great though, a good insight into a soldiers mind. Very well done.
Brooke ORiley chapter 1 . 11/26/2004
cute...an incredibly uninformative review, i'm aware, but i'm not much good at reviewing poetry. i liked it, so what more is there to say, really?