Reviews for To Prove You Wrong
CaffineAnonymous chapter 1 . 12/1/2004
Hmm...very intriguing. Something to think about. Nice. I like it.
The Fallen Caryatid chapter 1 . 11/29/2004
Beautiful. I've read similar stories again and again on this site, but what sets yours apart is that it's written wonderfully. I love your language, your descriptions, the feeling you give your characters. They don't seem trite and overworked.

"tempestuous sea of platinum hair" is one example of how you use use words to charge your story with feeling, although my absolute favorite description of yours was "so the spotlight spun each strand of her straw-brown hair into gold in turn" What a wonderful image that provided.
Weird Light chapter 1 . 11/28/2004
theres not much to say. you can see the picture in your mind and the idea though relativly plain is different for each person who reads it. hopefully it truly got through to some of us. i believe it was good
psychotically obsessed chapter 1 . 11/24/2004
hm...that was an interesting story, and i completely agree with the message. Why would you change yourself to be like everyone else. I am different to everyone else, and many people call me weird, but i'd rather be weird then a clone. I also have this quote i thought related really well to your story. "Beauty: Just another word for clone" Okay, this review has absolutely no point except to say i really liked your story and find it writing and don't ever become a cloneluv Psychotically Obsessed