Reviews for One Moment
Sang Yu Nung chapter 1 . 1/23/2005
Hey, thanks for the reviews! Sorry it takes me forever to get back to you. *hugs* This was a depressing poem, so wistful and full of longing... . REminds me of Kelly Clarkson's "Break Away" song. I love how this, though, has the feeling of asking someone to come with you instead of going out on your own. Beautiful, *write on*!
poetic abortion chapter 1 . 12/21/2004
;-; So sad. I love how it has this wistful almost dream like voice. ;-; Well done.

~ Noelle ~
WarriorHeart chapter 1 . 12/7/2004
I am right there with you, my life f-ing sucks right now.
graffiti-skies chapter 1 . 11/30/2004
well written poem. like the way it flows. another one i can totally relate to at the moment...all i want to do is fly away to utopia...yup! lol
AnarchyWithoutConsequence chapter 1 . 11/25/2004
The rhythm here really helps to accentuate your cause. Almost like short exasperated cries for help; then short bursts of happiness which exemplifies its bevity. A good poem!

Tom Madden chapter 1 . 11/24/2004
"Just take me away from this hell hole called my life". yup, i definitely share that thought. nice poem