Reviews for Save You
philoslove chapter 1 . 1/4/2005
The desparate tone was evident, which is good. Actually really, I think you can add much more imagery or vivid descriptions in your poems. Well, that's in my opinion, because I think you do have the talent to come up with much more brilliant poems. Many of your poems seem to come straight from the heart and the tone is always there, I love that. Keep working! :)
marshbar960 chapter 1 . 12/26/2004
very interesting poem. As long as God is with you He'll see things through. thanks for sharing and keep writing!

p.s. thanks also for reviewing my poems and i'll definitely check out more of yours very soon!
ByFireAndMoonlight chapter 1 . 12/15/2004
This is good, sad, and yet so very true. And yeah in the Labrith there are lyrics LIKE that in the movie in a REALLY weird song. it's kinda weird, because he's wearing tights, and bad makeup, and it's weird. yeah . . . Good poem! _
WarriorHeart chapter 1 . 12/7/2004
Hm... the ending really makes you wonder with the word "he".
poetic abortion chapter 1 . 11/30/2004
Thats soo sad. I love the emotions expressed. Just so raw and true. I love it.

~ Noelle ~
Cry Tears of Darkness chapter 1 . 11/25/2004
:D lovin the poems!
Tom Madden chapter 1 . 11/24/2004
really good. that "If I cannot save you" at the end really gives the mother's sadness and desperation and added punch. nice work