|Reviews for Sticks and Stones|
| Theory Of The 4th Dimension chapter 1 . 9/24/2005
O...so dark and twisted, yet very deep. It actualy gave me shivers. Nice job!
| Manuel Fajar chapter 1 . 3/27/2005
i have gained a sense of Thy faithfulness,
of that embedded depth so powerful,
resides demanding inside Thy heart's mind,—
strong devotions becoming compulsions,
strict love so bound it runs without control,
threatening to engulf Thy very soul,
consuming wild-fire coursing through Thy veins,
but I know this is in Thy past and gone,
a tribulation suffered memory,
that now survived marks Thee for greater things,
for that consistency will help Thee win,
when others without resolution quit,
for life's a distant race with ends unknown.
| u-will-never-know chapter 1 . 12/12/2004
Wow. sorry i havent reviewed in ages, i've been so busy.I really like this, its short but what you got in those lines were really powerful :DThnaks for all your reviews
| Flashes of Light chapter 1 . 11/30/2004
Oh, that was cold.. So simple yet so challenging to those words... Guh.
| poetic abortion chapter 1 . 11/30/2004
THAT IS SOO ME ! O.o I love this ! It's so good ! _
~ Noelle ~
| daphnegray78 chapter 1 . 11/26/2004
Wow. o.0 Very powerful. Great work.
| myno chapter 1 . 11/26/2004
Awesome poem, i really like it. The image of her cutting and trying to pretend that the only real pain comes from the blade is very poignant. By the way, thanks for the updating advice- i'll give it a try.
| lifescrewsusall chapter 1 . 11/26/2004
Really good poem. Short, and gets the point across well. Beautiful phrasing and I like how you used the idea of the sticks and stones thingy. It's very meaningful to me. I like it a lot. it's going on favorite stories, dude. OH YEAH AND MY GOD I LIKE THE NEW FICTIONPRESS TOO! it's worth the bitch and a half that it was for a little while. oh and happy thanksgiving hangover day.
| I-Am-Me-Only-Me chapter 1 . 11/25/2004
AM: wow, this is an awsome peom it would be nice if the saying was true...
| Cry Tears of Darkness chapter 1 . 11/25/2004
oh, oh... oh whats good... wow...
| heartbroken922 chapter 1 . 11/24/2004
This is so very true and you did a good job. Thanks for the review and keep up the good work!
| Anie Rain chapter 1 . 11/24/2004