Reviews for Importance
Mettie chapter 1 . 2/28/2005
Very thought-provoking. I truly appreciate the theme. The spacing messes with the fluidity in my opinion, but far be it from me to put a stuppor on one's creativity. My only note is that in the sentence 'There is the suns first light of a brand new day.' (An excellent sentence, btw.) 'Suns' sounds possessive and should have an apostrophe between the 'n' and the 's.' Otherwise, another excellent job! Keep Writin'! ~*Mettie*~
KonekOniko chapter 1 . 11/27/2004
Two words: Absolutely brilliant.
Anna178 chapter 1 . 11/26/2004
Very long...not that it's a bad thing. Lovely, truly. Continue to write, your