Reviews for My Fantasy Land
iglooey chapter 1 . 1/5/2005
Wow, awesome poem. Great descriptions and the feelings you created are so beautiful. It is slightly repititious, make it more diverse. Instead of repeating the same lines over and over again try to add maybe what will BE in this "fantasy land" of yours. I really love it.
Kirona of the skies chapter 1 . 11/25/2004
Ooh, good poem. Depressing, but good. That's one good thing about being depressed; you can get some good poems out of it. _