a great chapter!

I'm complying with your wishes here. I DEMAND for an UPDATE! P

i demand another update and i demand that you comply! *can't beat that one*

fab chapter! stupid brandon, he should just get hit by a bus.

haha, michael/allison banterfunny. i like it muchly.

toodles!

the whole band camp thing was hilarious! lol. its a sin not to have seen american pie, expecially the 2nd one, that one was hilarious.. :-) anyways, great chapter. brandon, what a dick. loved it though.

write more soon please,

Kellie

i heart this storyy please update!

This is really humorous. Great job! §

"Luckily enough, though, Michael is not at Lily’s so there is one battle that does not have to take place."

Um, I think you meant "Anthony" instead of "Michael". Anyway, great story so far! _

this was a good chapter, i just wish there was more! Well done

I have really enjoyed this story! What's going to happen next? I can't wait! Please keep updating, ok?

Ooh, I love this story! It's so good!

I kinda suspected that 'Danny' was short for 'Danielle' and that Brandon was cheating with her on Brandon.

But then, why's the boss still hanging out with him? It's not right!

Please, update!

~MD

Yay! This chapter was good, no romance though... darn

Can't wait for chapter 15!

Keep it up!

OMG

the ketchup. The freaking ketchup.

Dying. I was DYING, I tell you.

jeezus. funny stuff.

I dunno why. But when she said "Neat." I was laughing my arse off.I guess I haven't heard "neat." In forever. I'm so using it-when it's fitting to do so.

am still loving it.

must read on now

hi,wow great story...im so in love with it. post asap please... you left me at such a cliffhanger. I started the story today.. and so please post asap. Great storyarmen