Reviews for Reality Bites |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Wow. Her boss was being rather stern. Lol. I am so glad you updated XDI luff your story!I find it amusing that you use events in your own life in your story. You must have some crazy life ;) -Vanessa |
![]() ![]() ![]() Allison is so funny! I was laughing outloud at some of the things she was saying! Great chapter! :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() Wo-o this is getting more interesting by the minute! Keep it up! (And yes, finals week IS a bitch...I'm rapidly approaching it right now...) |
![]() ![]() i keep checking hoping u updated-you havent! so please do soon thank you cant wait |
![]() ![]() ![]() lol, this was really REALLY awesome. man, please update this asap. this story really has me on the edge and i can kinda imagine myself as Allison when im older. I have bad luck too. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Damn, the gut seems like a real asshole |
![]() ![]() Great story! I managed to finish toward Chapter 6 in less than two hours ( I'm a slow reader), and I've been loving it from the start! Keep up the good work. |
![]() ![]() not too sure if i like allison too much. i don't admire her for getting drunk- a drunk guy vomited over her, and to 'forget' that she's getting drunk? or she just didn't have enough self-control and got herself plastered at her BOSS' flat? i don't like her last speech either. her feelings are understandable of course. the boss was definitely wrong. but the "i thoughT YOU were different!" kind of speech is too sobby for my tastes however i am still intrigued :P hope you update soon! |
![]() ![]() fuck craig! and about the "let me begin" thing...gee i'm stupid. i can see it was intentional now. and i'm extra stupid because you actually used it in chapter 2 too! |
![]() ![]() brilliant. hilarious story so far. but i think you should change the beginning of chapter three. both chapters one and three begin with, "let me begin by telling you...". it's boring. :D liven it up. and are you ever going to update the last story on your stories list? i love your writing style (i know! only after three chapters! this is a record) and i want to read more of your writing, but i don't want to read a half-finished story; it will only drive me mad. well, i'll stop wasting our time and read :P p.s. update whore is my id on as well. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Great story! You gotta keep updating! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I just read the whole thing (In one sitting) and I just thought u should know...I LOVE IT! omg, this HAS to be one of the funniest stories here on FP and it's so going on my favorites. UPDATE SOON! |
![]() ![]() oH. DISS! haha. I'm so hyper right now. And I didn't even eat that much sugar. For some reason though... I just can't stop laughing. Perhaps I am kind of like Allison. I can't hold my sugar and she can't hold her liquor. Yeah... sure. I really enjoy the story so far though! |
![]() ![]() ![]() one word; hilarious |
![]() ![]() aw...that is a bit sad. *picketers roar*-We want Allison and Brandon! |