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   JunipertheSwift chapter 2 . 12/17/2004 OH OHMORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE!I wanna know what happens next!BAH!I LOVE IT! This is more MYSTERY than romance! WO! *dances* |
| JunipertheSwift chapter 1 . 12/17/2004 *cheers*IT'S EXCITING(sorry, it's late for me and I'm trying to keep myself awake)I love the "hot" comment... And I love the way you built up the background around your character-it gives us an idea on what she's really like in the beginning rather than the reader starting out being like "right, so, ahh... who is this person?" |
| tiger88 chapter 2 . 12/17/2004 ooh~ i like it! I hope you continue, its really good! I'll be looking for your next chapter...so beware. |
| Music To Your Ears chapter 1 . 12/17/2004 Hey this is really good. It kinda reminds me of Bridget Jones, but in a good way. You know...Mark Darcy going over to NY to work and Bridget saying anything that comes to her head. But it's good, really funny, I hope you keep it up. |
| GjK chapter 1 . 12/17/2004 well, I like your "rant-rave" style... but I have to say your character's desperteness to lose her viginity is a little unappealing. It seems immature, self depricating and a small way irritating. |
| l'ilmissnitpick chapter 1 . 12/17/2004 oh my god, this is freaking hilarious. if this were to be published, i would read it until the pages were dog-eared. well, maybe i exaggerate, but really, great job, great start, great story. i want more! |
| Trmpetplaya1 chapter 2 . 12/17/2004 Good story! It was a bit slow at first, but now that it's picked up you have me interested _ Keep on writing -Kera |
| springfiry chapter 1 . 11/28/2004 Update soon! |
| BreeJalil chapter 1 . 11/25/2004 this is realyl good so far, keep up the good work :) |
| Heather who can't remeber her sn chapter 1 . 11/25/2004 Haha! I'm loving this so much. You write so well that a person feels like they are actually there. Your writing style kind of reminds me of 'Bridgete (sp?) Jones'... which is an awesome compliment. I can't wait to read more! I envy how you seem to just pull awesome plots out of nowhere...lol. If you update, please tell me_~ |
| FamousOneLiners chapter 1 . 11/25/2004 I love this, so funny, she sounds just like me, :)update soon ! |
| Katy chapter 1 . 11/25/2004 Happy Thanksgiving! I really like your story, please continue! Stories with hot bosses are my favorite! |
| FrozenWaterFaerie chapter 1 . 11/25/2004 Hi. I have one ? about your story. Is it true? |
| Drac-frst chapter 1 . 11/25/2004 aw no cookie lol Oh well. anyways it's a good start please continue! life is hell, but that doesn't mean you can't oggle your boss behind his back! lol update soon! |
| Davina Sage chapter 1 . 11/25/2004 i love it! its very... im not sure how to describe it, but it cathces your attention and keeps it, while skipping all over the place. oo yea im articulate... lol... please write more... happy thanksgiving... |