Damn cool Babe! Especially the end; "Knowing that i lied" It really touches me:)

really good poem..i like this

True... I like this poem. Great Work. Please don't bee sad anymore. I feel the same.

That's how i feel with my mom everyday you basically just sumed it all up i can't stand either of my parents and they can't stand me so much they made me sleep outside a few nights ago and it was cold but anyway keep writing 4 eva and always for ever yours

Scarred Heart

i can relate to this... right now, actually. I'm only 13, so all this angst is new to me, but this is exactly how i, and some of my friends feel. sorry. you probably don't want to hear a sap story in a review, so i'll get to the point.

great job! keep it up!

wow. jsut wow. another great poem. your poetry is all so powerful and moving! *adds to fav authors* great poem. really it is.

*done reading all of our recent posts dance*

Totally know how this feels. Very well protrayed. You show your feelings well.~hawke

bloody hell...that was amazing...i have to say that it really effected me coz i know how this is big time...the flow was good and the rhyme was excellent...i especially love the ending...nicely done...i love it. lots of love ~AllyCred~

P.S.~~thanks for the review appreciate it.

Heey there babe! How're you doing?

I absolutely love this babe. It's really deep and I enjoyed reading it!

Cuz you know about all that stuff going on with my dad and mom, I know how that is you know?

Anyway. Great poem babe. It's awesome! _

Much Love-Suicidal_Greeting