|Reviews for Tell Me Lies|
| Faithless Juliet chapter 1 . 4/20/2009
I like how you turn the notion of a lie into an object, like a lamp, or a car. You discribe laying them (the lie) out in the sun to let them become succulent for you. It's a very powerful notion, like fattining a pig up before slaughtering it to improve the taste.
I miss your writing, I've been reading some of your poems, and trying to find a piece that I haven't reviewed. It makes me miss it even more :(
Post more soon if you can.
| Dr. Anonymous chapter 1 . 1/28/2005
I like it because you're using similes to describe evil lies told to you that you just swallow. Very good. Read and review some of my stuff please. Thanks
| Questioning Silence chapter 1 . 1/23/2005
I'm not sure what I think of this. I kind of wish it went into a bit more detail, though I got from it how easy it is to want blissful lies instead of cold, hard fact. I think I like it.~Questioning Silence
| myno chapter 1 . 1/21/2005
odd poem. just... different.