Reviews for Fatal Love
DoRehMi chapter 1 . 5/10/2005
the ending was sad. but your writing style is awesome! i was totally into the story.
emptyword chapter 1 . 1/28/2005
This was very chilling. And horribly sad. It really makes you think-and wonder. "You’re sick in the mind. It is against the laws of nature, to worship a cousin beyond paternal or family love." And her sudden "betrayal" was written of fabulously. Very very nice.
Werewolf Nighteyes chapter 1 . 1/24/2005
Hmm...yeah. People can be so full of themselves sometimes. Griff deserved what happened to him. Nice one!
Laura Barton chapter 1 . 11/29/2004
It was indeed interesting, especially the ending -
elasandra chapter 1 . 11/28/2004
POOr Griff! I liked that character.:D. this was sad, but i still loved it. Good job! CAn't wait to see moer!
Ralph the green nosed Reindeer chapter 1 . 11/27/2004
I lov your story, especially the discriptions, but have u ever seen a real sword fight? Some of the 'discrptions' of their short fight were a little off. Pleas write more!

ps: tanks for reviewing my story
Stormie Greye chapter 1 . 11/26/2004
Wow, interesting story. I never pictured Griff coming to an ending like that. Wow, you totally caught me offguard! LoL! Nice one-shot though! .
Silentwriter9 chapter 1 . 11/26/2004
oo i liked and i didn't expect the ending at all.

*Silent Writer*