Reviews for Across the Fence
Camman chapter 1 . 11/26/2004
Good rhyme scheem! I like the description too, very good. One thing I feel it needs is little more structure.
daphnegray78 chapter 1 . 11/26/2004
Great poem...

And, even if unintentionally, a great metaphor. It could be taken as the forest representing our goals, and the barbed wire representing our inhibitions. I know you probably didn't intend it that way (kudos if you did!), but it struck me as a great metaphor.

Metaphor or not, it's a great poem. Awesome work!

Daphne