Reviews for Dead
Love to Laugh chapter 1 . 6/5/2007
If I ever chose a poem to relate to it would be this one! THe whole "Darkness is so much better than reality" is such a true feeling sometimes. Your ability to put pain into words and make it bautiful is uncanny.
TeapotLid chapter 1 . 2/11/2006
"Heart screaming and bleeding, but smile is in place"

-The Whispering Calls-
darkmistresslae chapter 1 . 1/20/2006
Wow. I really felt your pain and I could see it turn to apathy within the poem. I think that's why I liked it so much. I could glimpse into your emotions. The walking alone part reminded me of "Boulevard of Broken Dreams" by Green Day, and I really think that it fits nicely with the tone of the poem. It adds to the loneliness and hurt. Really nice.
SilveredScales chapter 1 . 4/11/2005
o my god... that's so deep. its hauntingly beautiful *silver tears stream down my cheeks*it person you appear to be really reminds me of someone, just so you know
GravyPants chapter 1 . 11/27/2004
Whoa. Nice. Kinda knocked my socks off. Very good.
xArtificiallyxSweetx chapter 1 . 11/27/2004
wow... powerful
My-BleedingPen98 chapter 1 . 11/27/2004
wow. it really paints a picture.. really good.~Julianne