When I read this my head went spinning. I thought "what in the world happened to rational fantasy?" Then I thought if fantasy was rational, would it be fantasy or something else. Now youv'e left my mind full of crazy waco of the hook thoughts like those I wrote down. What a crazy, cool, mind spinning, and waco story. You wrote a well made, if not cazy short story. Wow!

Hi...thankee for reviewing my French poem. About the sky being big and blue, I agree that that is quite boring and obvious, especially after reading your poems like Watermelon Moon, but I don't think I have the vocabulary to do anything much more than that. Your suggestion of leaving her falling interests me, and usually I would not just say "she died," but in this case I didn't think about it in the English because I was just translating, and the French one was for an assignment that said there was supposed to be a sudden shock at the end, so I thought that having her die was more shocking. And then when I put it on here it just didn't occur to me to change it any...but now I think about it, your idea does appeal to me.

About this story of yours, I'll say what I usually say about stories of this type: the twisted fairy tale thing is a little overdone, I think, and its tone always seems to be the same so it can get a little old sometimes. However, I did read this all the way to the end and I did enjoy it somewhat and I did find it amusing enough. I just like most of your other stuff a lot better.

El. Oh. El. Hysterical. Oi, what's that one kid in the book about the rings? Hilarious.

Miasha! Lovely story. Though I think that I've read it was too many times. :)

Well... that was...umm...weird... but enjoyable! I must search for more of your stories. They're quite funny. This story is now my favourite comedy one I've read on this site. Keep up the good work!

I love this piece! especially the bits where you bring in other faery tales! :P