Reviews for Biological Werewolves?
Stormie-Daze chapter 13 . 5/2/2008
Very cool story I cant wait till the Next chapter!
Estelin chapter 13 . 10/6/2007
I love the character Rin. Keep up the good work and writing. as well take your time and don't rush as i have noticed that it does not work.

p.s could you check out my story when you have time. it is called Philosopher acres farm
Shiru23454 chapter 13 . 1/9/2006
Yay! _

Kinda short...but I can tell you're just getting back in gear with the story, so it's okay. I had the same problem with my stories on , my 'puter sploded and I lost all my work. D
Shiru23454 chapter 12 . 1/8/2006
None of the good werewolf stories on fiction press are updating anymore...;_;
Untrusting chapter 11 . 2/1/2005
ok well i love your plot its so great it inspired me to think of something like this- trust me it wont be at all the same but its great and well i love your charactors and how you fit them in with eachother so yea
sugarplumfairie chapter 10 . 1/3/2005
Lovely...very lovely. It was perfectly delightful, like a big rasberry danish ready to sink your teeth into and taste its deliciousness on your tongue! More I say! More! :D


sugarplumfairie chapter 9 . 12/28/2004
Very very very good...please continue! Don't quit! :( Rin! The Gang! No!

Anyway, another fantastic chapter. If you stop now I would be very sad...hehehe. Everyone please review!


nooneishome chapter 9 . 12/26/2004
I really like the story and I hope you do finish it! :D
sugarplumfairie chapter 8 . 12/11/2004
Yet another good chapter! The boys were so funny, especially Thomas and Cyber...(hehehe)

Can't wait till the next chapter!

Toodle oo

sugarplumfairie chapter 7 . 12/6/2004
Another superb chapter!

Can't wait till friday...Toodle oo!

nooneishome chapter 6 . 12/4/2004
That was good! I really like it.
sugarplumfairie chapter 6 . 12/3/2004
Since you asked for constructive criticisms I just spotted a few mistakes in chapter five and six but they're not to worry about as I make silly mistaktes too. They are just spelling errors.

Chapter Five:

*presence of his family and friends

since i went to *college

Chapter Six:

You should by now guess the *consequences if you fail

Overall there is nothing for me to criticise about and I enjoyed both the new chapters. Excellent job as always and still looking foward for further chapters! If it is possible (because I am wanting to know desperately) is Rin going to fall in love? Because that will be exceedingly cute!


sugarplumfairie chapter 4 . 12/1/2004
You have yet again written a fantastic chapter! I'm sorry to hear that you can't update as frequently as you have but no matter, I will check everyday for chapter five! Good luck with the finals and hope you pass the all with good marks!


Eagerly awaiting the next chapter...

sugarplumfairie chapter 3 . 11/30/2004
I think I am going to make it a habit to review every chapter you post...hehehe...I get the feeling that Crest is close to Rin because she is a girl in a boy predominant gang, which is a very good thing. I like her already. And Jessie is so sweet and like a lil' bro to her! He wrapped an arm around Crest...hehehe I love that bit!

Looking foward to chapter four!Toodles...

moonfox210 chapter 1 . 11/30/2004
get on to the next chapter! Before Christmas comes yea?
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