wow - very impressed. Good personal voice. which, even though it's long, makes it enjoyable to read.

lots of description! finally! a story that satisfies my tastes! i thought my chapters were too long, but it's good to see someone else who takes the time to explore into the thoughts of characters.

i must continue to read when i have more time...

keep it up!

mallory kendall

(oh yeah, i suppose it's bad to say: "check out my stuff!", but i have no shame *wink*)