Reviews for Summer's Striking Shimmer
Slinkygirl chapter 1 . 8/22/2005
You describe things so beautifully. I do hope you keep writing, you've got talent and some great potential.
L.E. Kelly chapter 1 . 1/8/2005
This was gorgeous. I'm not a big fan of summer, but this made me miss it a little.

I'm glad you liked my short story-type deal. It was just something that came to mind.

The instant messaging in your mind, that came from my favorite book, Feed by M.T. Anderson. I highly reccommend reading it. Anderson makes the idea of having full internet access in your mind sound like it could one day happen. It's amazing.

Anyway, thanks again!
Silver Phoenix Falling chapter 1 . 12/6/2004
Thanks very much for reviewing my poem ("Trees"); I really appreciate it!

I like the imagery of this poem; it's very pretty. I also like how you've given a sort of magical quality to the entire poem. Great use of personification, too!
Dhampir chapter 1 . 12/6/2004
I like the magical overtonbes in your description. The colors are also very well done. One thing though, you have soar in two lines, one after another. Other than that, very nice!