Reviews for The Hidden Rose
acccountnolongerinuse chapter 1 . 9/5/2005
More, it's wonderful!
jilyn90 chapter 1 . 4/14/2005
keep writing
Tempergurl chapter 1 . 12/30/2004
Good so far. Keep going, also in some spots the story is in 2nd person and in other's it is in 1st. Try and choose which one you want. But otherwise i really like it, it has humor which is AWSOME!
Cowgurl4God chapter 1 . 12/27/2004
I just loved it! ahahahahahahahahahahah! Man that was so funny!
sugarplumfairie chapter 1 . 12/20/2004
This is very good! I can see what is going on in this chapter very clearly, and I find it easy to picture the western 'feel' to it as well. Overall a good job. Thank you for reviewing my work some while is much appreciated.


Essence of Reality chapter 1 . 12/15/2004
Really good use of descriptive words!

Please update soon!
MageDay chapter 1 . 12/2/2004
I usually don't read western, but I just saw "Dances With Wolves" at school and I dunno - your story's summary just caught my interest. U going to continue?
x-TheSmallPrint-x chapter 1 . 12/2/2004
hey! It's a cool beginning so far... continue the story, the summery sounds really good, and I want to see how it turns out!

And thank you for reviewing my story!
Erica Beth chapter 1 . 12/1/2004
I liked it, it sounds like a good start to the story, update soon! ~Erica
QueenSavvy chapter 1 . 12/1/2004
This is a great story so far. You should continue it! Oh yeah and thanks for reading and reviewing my story. That was really nice. Anyway update this one really soon okay!