Not Quite Dry Eyed chapter 1 . 5/7/2005
i really like it great job keep writing 4 eva and always

forbidden passion chapter 1 . 1/3/2005
i loved the line "the metalic taste of my doings" great! i love your poetry! added to my fav's!
Out-Of-Reality chapter 1 . 12/8/2004
It was extremely descriptive! I loved it! It was sad but soemthing I think about. very well written. What did your teach say about it? I mean i get sent to a counsellor for writing stuff like that!
Medevia chapter 1 . 12/6/2004
How sad and depressing. Interesting how it is stated in the beginning that cutting would help your problems, but by the end, all that is thought of is the regret and disgust of ever having done it. Quite descriptive.
aLifeofPain chapter 1 . 12/4/2004
Ah . . . so good . . .

Is ur name alex? haha cause mine is too.

Well yeah anyways . . . this piece was really great . . . dark but it is so good . . .
Mia of Orginized Chaos chapter 1 . 11/29/2004
Wow... It is kinda poetic in it's own way. It is very dark, pretty disturbing, and really good at the same time Great job. I'll watch out for more
twistedtruths chapter 1 . 11/29/2004
very good. i found it poetic as well. i liked it.
Keith Andrew chapter 1 . 11/29/2004
hmm, dark, disturbing and really excellent. This is amazing alex, keep it up-love you Keith Andrew
Syrins chapter 1 . 11/29/2004
Very poetic indeed. Nice.